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A Crown for The King Whose Loss is Victory

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by Brennen Gregory Paul Daniels

 

I


Who is this king of glory 

painted powerful, white, and proud?

Must I shed this shaded skin to slip into his story?

Must I stop bathing in the ground


this coffee complexion was so evidently pulled from?

I still feel the Tigers flowing deep in these bones,

still hear the Euphrates gentle hum.

This body is too used to being ripped from homes


it never asked to be placed in.

Too worried about 

its own existence being a sin

to doubt 


the comfort of being hugged,

and robed in His own blood.






II


Robed in His own blood.

Clothed in garments ripped,

gambled, and shrugged

off shoulders by whips.


Wrapped in swaddling cloths,

laid in wood nailed together as a manger.

Nailed onto a wooden cross, looking more like a lost 

son returning home. A stranger


leaving the strange land He immigrated 

to, not to take refuge 

or to be assimilated.

Just to be used


and to wear, for me 

a face mangled and gory.






III


A face mangled and gory 

and beautiful all the same.

Why then, when his eyes take inventory 

of mine do I feel like flame 


grasping to the end of a wick

that hasn’t been lit in years?

I confess, I feel quite foreign among the sick

and the poor, and the queer.


I wonder how He felt so at home,

He who stoops down into the mud.






IV


He who stoops down into the mud

into the soiled river of time

into the tide of shed blood

and finite life


He who makes war with peace

who does violence to hate

who gives thieves release 

and murderers clean slates 


He who (really worst of all) takes 

the whore that I am and gives

his body again and again to slake

this unquenchable thirst I cannot outlive


Is this the king we know?

Is this the king we want? 






V


Is this the king we want?

I wonder, as I look at white 

american jesus gazing nonchalant

into the distant sky.


Has he grown bored of our bodies

broken in the streets? 

Of the the wars we must daily wage 

just to maintain a shred of the humanity


that was whipped off our backs.

Has the privilege of heaven 

so cleansed him of every crack

forced by foreign thorns, leaving him without expression 


I do not see my Jesus in his health and wealth. 

He who promises not safety, but death.






VI

You who promise not safety, but death

tell me this. How should I measure my days?

by the freedom to press any word upon the page of my breath

by the raise, the pension, the 401k


You who promise not understanding, but suffering

tell me this. How should I capture certainty?

through stock markets and free trade

through bottom lines and stable economies


You who promise the loss of some things 

to gain everything, tell me this.  Why do I 

so easily settle for things not colored in eternity,

like the soft caress love gives before its goodbye.


You, whose love is both comforting and confronting,  

You, whose call is less lullaby, more hunting.






VII


You, whose call is less lullaby, more a hunt

please, keep hunting me. 

i confess the current 

of my heart is to crown comfort king.


Seeing eyes are blind

the way circles never end

and the stars shine 

even when the night blends


back into the morning.

You know, i can’t really love you

with this heart so bent on whoring 

why then do you choose 


to take my death?

Just to have and to hold all creation till its final breath?






VIII


To have and to hold all creation till its final breath.

In sickness and in health,

till death

sews what's been ripped apart 


back together,

folds all the finite

edges into forever, 

into original design  


but better.

Doesn’t erase scars 

but rearranges its letters 

to spell beautiful. 


Is this the king we want?

Is this the king we seek?






IX


Is this the king we seek?

I think as I watch my president on the news.

3,277 people in America died this week

and all he spews


is nonsense

twisted and bound in 

fear and phonics

that makes it sound like we will win.


And I wonder what it would look

like if for once we lose

I wonder if maybe, finally, we’d be mistook

for You. 


but we have forgotten our names

while sniffing around gold and fame






X


While sniffing around for gold and fame

conquistadors renamed massacre 

into missionary. The gospel proclaimed

as war chant, a racial battler 


bloodied with black bodies

who never asked to be colored black.

The God embodied in the narrative 

as a Jew, murdered in the attack.


and forced into serving 

the god of prosperity

and deserving

and safety.  


That premeditated technique 

retracting from the reek of weakness.






XI


I retract from the reek of weakness

as if its a disease 

I’m not accustomed to. As if briefness

isn’t guaranteed.


As if anything is. Except

dying. Yesterday 

I wept

for Day


who has perished

a thousand times 

past and present 

in view of my very eyes


and yet every morning I wake up the same

searching in places where He never came.






XII


Are we searching in places where he never came?

I wonder as I sit in my stale college cafeteria 

surrounded by people whose names 

I don’t know. I grab a second bowl of cereal 


Try to keep the fear at bay

the constant concern

that maybe I’ll wake up one day

and learn 


that You were never here

that You were always on the streets

I don’t go near.

This I do believe


You are not the king we King we want.

No, but you are the King we need.






XIII


You are the King we need.

So like us 

in our suffering,

yet so different. 


Always re-creating 

ugly. Always 

overcoming 

what we cannot escape.


But not by going over

only, always going through 

like needle and sower

you are stitching brand new  


out of old injury. 

You who’s loss is victory. 






XIV


You whose loss is victory

teach us how to lose. 

How to taste defeat humbly. 

Soak our skin in all the hues


of brokenness 

that we may be made whole

by all the openness

of the holes 


pierced into our bodies.

Only then will we look 

like you, shoddy 

and maybe misunderstood.


Leave space to ask of my story.

Who is this King of glory? 






XV


Who is this King of glory? 

Robed in His own blood

face mangled and gory.

He who stoops down into the mud.


Is this the King we want?

He who promises not safety, but death

Whose call is less lullaby, more a hunt

to have and to hold all creation till its final breath


Is this the King we seek?

While sniffing around gold and fame

retracting from the reek of weakness

Are we searching in places where he never came?


Yes, You are King we need

You whose loss is victory. 



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